Been trawling the net, desperate to find a copy of Fallen, a short story by Alicia Gifford. One of the most perfect pieces of flash fiction I've ever read.
Note to Self - when you fall in love with a piece of fiction, make a COPY. Don't just paste in a link to the old magazine issue and assume you'll be able to find the story 2 years later.
This morning I found and read another piece by Gifford - After the Fire.
Liked the way Gifford doesn't always use dialogue marks or tags, the way it added to a deep 3rd person POV, a feeling of momentum.
I've also seen writers strip away marks and tags when there's only a few lines of dialogue - so the dialogue doesn't take on more significance than it should
Want to experiment with this for draft no. 1057 of the WIP.