I keep coming back to the flash about the girl who suddenly realises (finally admits?) her boy friend doesn't love her. I've got loads of writing 'doodles', some moments I like, but nothing to show in an interesting way, that things have changed.
I'm in love with the story title - Now I just need to find an actual story to attach it to.
In all my drafts the girl is seeing stuff and reacting internally. Then there's this moment of shock and revelation. And then what? She can't just turn to her boy friend and say "today I realised your guru is a sleazy little creep, a fake. He's as fake as our relationship. I don't want to be with you anymore."
Problem - How to show a series of small moments that lead up to her waking up to reality?
Maybe end it with the girl still clinging to illusion, the same way her BF continues to cling to a guru who is obviously fake.
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